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MUSIC, AMBIENCE AND SOUND ART => Forum Member Projects News and Promotion => Topic started by: Castleview on July 26, 2013, 08:52:09 PM

Title: Need some feedback on a new track I made.
Post by: Castleview on July 26, 2013, 08:52:09 PM
http://castleview.bandcamp.com/track/apparition (http://castleview.bandcamp.com/track/apparition)

I really appreciated the feedback I got the last time I posted music here. It'd be great if I could get some feedback on this track. I've been trying to improve my music since then, taking into consideration the advice I received here. The track is about 4 and a half minutes long.
Title: Re: Need some feedback on a new track I made.
Post by: no.name on July 27, 2013, 05:13:33 AM
good work in context of michael mantra, klause wiese, ect.

i am concerned what the guitar is tryig to say to the audience? for me its too monotonic.

i would like more space and more expression there.

and maybe some beginning is required. some drops or pops.

imagine wind in the trees, sand, waves and stones. in the language it have a lot to offer.

wish all the best for You.

 :)
Title: Re: Need some feedback on a new track I made.
Post by: Castleview on July 27, 2013, 07:15:12 AM
Thanks. You actually helped me to come up with an idea for a new intro.
Title: Re: Need some feedback on a new track I made.
Post by: chris23 on July 29, 2013, 01:44:59 PM
I enjoyed it. I'm not a musician, so I don't have any technical advice.