Thanks for your interest.
I'm totally newbie, with no musical experience, so this is my first track...
Hello Crossing The Threshold,
I agree, it's a nice start. The mix seems a little thin. I would bring in more of that mid-range drone, and maybe have it modulate into some other chords for variety a little sooner.
I would also try to resist the temptation of verbing the sounds too much. Maybe leave some sounds in the foreground for contrast, with just a touch of echo or verb.